Date post: 2017-09-09 10:46
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 87% = OK
No of words: 95% = More content wanted.
Chars per words: 97% = OK
Fourth root words length: 98% = OK
Word Length SD: 97% = OK
Unique words: 97% = OK
Unique words percentage: 656% = OK
syllable_count: 87% = OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 98% = OK
In conclusion, our society would be healthier if more people took part in sports of all kinds. We should continue to try to prevent accidents and injuries. However, we should also ensure that sports are challenging, exciting, and, above all, fun.
Overall, I believe, the biggest risk in life is to not take any risk at all. Banning vulnerable games would in some way take away the freedom of an individual. Although, it must be made sure that everything is technically sound before you perform the sport.
Sports, competition, and games seem to be natural to humans. children learn their own limits and strengths through play with others, but they also learn valuable social lessons about what acceptable behavior and the rights of others. Sport therefore is not just a physical phenomenon, but a mental and social one.
There also should be limits to the power of governments to ban sports. If one sport is banned because of alleged danger, then what sport would be next? Boxing is the most common target of opponents of dangerous sports. But if boxing is banned, would motor racing follow, then rugby, wrestling, or weightlifting? Furthermore, many sports would go underground, leading to increased injury and illegal gambling.
6) Introduction is a must. You don't believe you could get a good grade without introduction, do you? 7) Body: 8 paragraphs are also necessary. Three is a magical number. It can do wonders to your overall band score. 8) Conclusion. You do not want to infuse your examiner with a feeling of incompleteness.
Furthermore, playing such sports like bunji jumping, free style boxing and wrestling may considered as the symbol of man power and something of gaining prestige in society. People ignore the consequences that might be the result of accident associated with them. Ultimately, these accidents may leads to unpleasant results. Do we really need such games to play as we do sports to keep ourselves fit?
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 657% = OK
Auxiliary verbs: 665% = OK
Conjunction : 67% = OK
Relative clauses : 665% = OK
Pronoun: 87% = OK
Preposition: 76% = OK
Nominalization: 89% = OK
In conclusion, it is not wrong to say that playing dangerous sports may results in lifelong injuries or even death. Hence, such sports should be banned or government should bring some control measures or restrictions to lower the risk to the players.
There are many reasons. One of the many reasons is lacking of linking words. Did you use linking words? They would make your structure clearer and therefore improve your overal score.